Promise Her the Moon

1 taj mahal

(800 words)

“Be polite and listen carefully,” said the old man to his four daughters, “and don’t speak unless you’re spoken to!”
Their names were Anshula, Bakula, Chandhini and Darshini. By the grace of God they had been born exactly three years apart so that all four shared the same birthday – today, November 1st – unique in all the land.
Anshula was 16, Bakula 13, Chandhini 10, and little Darshini just seven. Now they waited, dressed in beautiful saris, Anshula in maroon, Bakula in ruby red, Chandhini in royal blue and finally, little Darshini in emerald green. Their mother was considerably younger than her husband and now stood, nervously adjusting their saris and combing their long black hair. “He’ll be here soon. Be sure to stand straight and smile!”
There was a knock on the door which made them all jump. The old man answered it to a messenger, who proclaimed, “The Great Prince will be here within the quarter hour, he approaches the edge of town.”
“Thank you,” said the old man, handing the messenger a coin. He turned to his daughters. “You may sit until his Royal Highness arrives.”
The daughters sat down on two long sofas in the large, high-ceilinged chamber. The family were not rich but by virtue of the daughters’ shared birthday, they had acquired a certain fame. People would visit them, regarding them as holy due to the coincidence, and were accustomed to leaving gifts of money, sides of meat, fine wines and the like.
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PLEASE NOTE: AS OF 11TH DECEMBER 2017 THIS STORY, IN A SLIGHTLY EXTENDED VERSION, HAS BEEN SUBMITTED TO SEVERAL PUBLISHERS FOR CONSIDERATION AS A CHILDREN’S PICTURE BOOK, SO I’M REMOVING IT FROM THE BLOG FOR THE TIME BEING. IF IT DOESN’T GET ACCEPTED BY THE SUMMER OF 2018 I’LL REINSTATE IT WITH THE NEW ENDING.
I’LL POST UPDATES HERE REGARDING ITS PROGRESS (IF ANY!)

 





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